by ronde
This was just to far out there. Never really meshed. Was not that good of a story.
My late wife loved shoes also. She kept them in the shoeboxes in which they came. She put a label on the front of the box with the color and style!
5
I walked in to my wife's closet once to find a pair of her shoes. I feared for my life and was tempted to call search and rescue to come for me. My clothes are relegated to another closet as there is no room in the walk in. She’s happy so I’m happy, but don’t dare use the good towels.
You’ve created a boring woman who is already starting to distance herself from her future husband. Neither of them are characters a reader can be compassionate about and I’m sure the ratings will reflect that.
Cute and fairly accurate. No swapping, no degradation, no outlandish body parts, no completely impossible sex. Just 2 people learning who each other is. A pleasant change from the normal trash that permeates Literotica.
lost interest in paragraph 1... wearing the same pair of panties for an entire week? Just... blech.
There must be a hidden button that allows readers to turbocharge a 5 star score. This little gem deserves at least a 19. There are so many incredibly endearing bits here. One of my favorites was his fears of his daughter bringing home someone just like him. Soo funny and confirming that he has everything it takes to be a great father all around. The author has truly created a likable pair of characters.
I thought you did a great job with the story. It was a fun read. I enjoyed it. 5stars
Very funny..a nice way of change to your regular writing pattern..loved it despite some undesirable comments- 5 Stars..
This story is surely a change of pace for ronde. It’s good to push boundaries a bit. Thanks for a little slice of life.
Nice, something a little different pace. Liked the humor written into the story.
Thanks for sharing….