by youbadboy
enjoyed it greatly...you have ...the "touch"....
Excellent! It read like a poem. And man it was good!
Thanks for writng!
Sexmate
I love the way you've kept your writers' mechanics hidden. I very much felt this one, rather than just read along. The thing with the window was so sexy, especially the cum. I love it.
So very hot. The window, the confusion. Make it longer next time though.
What a gift, an expansion beyond - traveling with you in an expanded sensual dimension.
WTF? This was an exact copy of "Experiments in Invisibility #01". The same lines and words, and as bad as the original.