All Comments on 'What Dreams May Come Ch. 01'

Interesting start to a story. Good concept.

Thanks, LokiFox! My first time world building. The idea came to me when I was running a track and bored to death. Hope I don’t screw it up. Thanks, again.

It’s a great intro and a concept that I haven’t encountered before. Very vivid too.

Tess (UK)

Thanks, Tess! I hope you have fun with the series. Please keep letting me know what you think - it really helps me get better.

Gotta agree with Tess. Thanks for sharing this.