by BigZeke13
I love the sex in these stories but the part when Jack and Donna got engaged was beautiful. THANK YOU!
The swap with Eddie was lame. Not calling out Jacob was weak. Neither should have been included. They take away from the store by adding nothing of interest. Overall this chapter should have been a 5 but only could give it a 3 since I've liked this series so much. Otherwise it was a 1 with what I mentioned.
I must be honest here...I preferred the story in Divi and her antics. It was really good before but I feel it has lost some zip and forgive me, comes no where hear your excellent "pool boy" story