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All Comments on 'Valentine's Tears'

by elfin_odalisque

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
great

I liked this story, good description of your characters surroundings,

very good twist at the end, over all well written and enjoyable.

Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Oh, Neat!

Loved the twist of the tale.

HP

chytownchytownover 8 years ago
I Love It*****

What a great piece of writing. Very entertaining story!! Thanks for sharing.

gmann57gmann57over 8 years ago

Very nice, I wish that could happen in my life but my wife left me because of cancer 2 short years ago. Thanks for your story. 5 stars

BoldVultureBoldVultureover 8 years ago
Saw it coming; loved it all the more.

And I'm going to read all your stories now.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
But Why?

The guy is a complete WIMP!!! He CAN NOT take responsibility! Typical man of today...

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wicked twist

Not what I expected at the end. I usually pride myself on seeing the twists a mile away. You got me on this one. Well done story.

Anonymous
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