All Comments on 'Too Good to be You'

good characters and interactions

Hot. Sexy. Nicely complex. Perfectly paced. Lovable characters.

I am very pleased for the new lovers, and hopeful for their eventual life together. But you didn't convince me that Mary might not hook up with Joshua one afternoon after bumping into him somewhere by surprise. Or at least a surprise to her. For a 25 year old you make her talk and act like a high school kid. If there was supposed to be resolution and closure in this story, I missed it. If it was supposed to leave us trying to guess what happens next, then I guess I'm the wrong reader.

Thank you for your efforts.