All Comments on 'The Unwanted Houseguest Rebooted 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
A change of pace

This was certainly an interesting installment in the series; Beth is coming to acc or her need for real men whilst trying to maintain her marriage and knowing she can never return to the way she once was. This story has the feel of a filler arch; like in an anime series when the manga hasn’t yet caught up to the animated adaptation. As as the creator of the series, you’re coming to the point where you have to choose whether Beth stays with David and has her cocks on the side secretly or if she goes full slut and becomes the woman she was meant to be...at the cost of her husband. Maybe he will be an unwilling cuckold..:.maybe a willing one. Or maybe he falls apart when his greatest fears are realized. All of us are excited for whatever you choose to do. Besides, if you write it one way and hate it, you can always write another and play that fantasy out as well:)

warner34warner34about 5 years ago
Excellent Chapter

I loved this chapter. Beth gets bolder with David present and becomes more confident as a slut while resenting her mother in law for the same. I love the conflict and change. Please keep these coming! Can’t wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
knocked up

with all the seed Beth has taken how is it she's not knocked up yet?

federiquitofederiquitoabout 5 years ago

The female characters like Beth, (The Unwanted Houseguest) and Amber (Welcome to the Neighborhood) are in our opinion the best, because they are very DRAMATIC, for they with their mind and heart, hate black men, but their body betrays them and she loves the big black cock.

And that internal struggle, makes the two characters, the best.

Simply to thank you for these two fantastic stories that you have written.

We never tire of rereading them.

Greetings and we look forward to your next project.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Are we going to get another chapter soon???

Loving the series. Need more please!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Fucking embarrassing.

Hahaha. Could the writer possibly dream up a more stupid name for a racist cardboard cutout thanTitus?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Perfect Hot Wife

Well written . Her experience with the gym trainer seems more realistic than the original

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