All Comments on 'The Surrogate Ch. 06'

this sounds like it is the last chapter

Love your work as always

for a really sordid paragraph on the head of the SOJ getting it on with Mila! what a perv I am! must be all the Michelle Nylons stories I read, giggle. Thank you for such an entertaining piece of writing

Another fantastic series .. although I thought it ended a bit abruptly for me but I can’t wait for your next brilliant work to come along.

I loved the story. The build up of love and friendship. It was great

The best. I enjoyed this entire story more than any other. I could easily enjoy spending time with Mila. My only regret is that it ended at Chapter 6.

Very fascinating story, waited for each chapter impatiently.

Please think about a follow up.

Peter getting Rachael pregnant? Or Sarah? Or both?

Or something from 'Group Sex' or 'Lesbian'.

Maybe DEA approaching Mila again?

I really enjoyed this series I looked forward to each new chapter. I liked the ending though I would have preferred "Rachel" not to be as comfortable in the end.

Great story thoroughly enjoyed it

Loved the series. Be a very interesting movie.

I also was expecting an escape-via-DEA ending but this was better. really fun series that I enjoyed reading.

Thanks for this saga, which was quite well-written. Besides a lot of hot sex, it also had a compelling story arc.

I got a bit of "handmaids tale " influence from the story but it was a good read

Jas x

Love the story! What if Rachel agrees to bear Peter's child so Mila could become a real wife and mother?

I would love for Mila to come back. Many stories on this site have no touch with the real world. This one just feels like it could have really happen. Great writing and a great tale.

Wonderful story. Thank you.

Just a note of appreciation Michelle for such well written stories, not just this series but all of your work. The story lines, characters, creative adjective descriptions and painted details make the reader eager for the next chapters.

This was a really fun story, and I loved the way that she found out the secret of a drug-running cult and nothing happened except she joined them, instead of the traditional thriller plot where they try to expose expose the cult and the cult tries to kill them. The ending with Rachael was a nice touch, and it's sweet that even she got a happy ending of sorts.

I enjoyed it greatly. I've read it twice. Plot is really laid out to entice you. The sex description was enough to titalate me. Great job!!

I really enjoyed the series. Well developed characters, and sex was hot.

The only thing I was hoping for was more of an outline of the patriarchal rules. For example, i was truly hoping Mila would receive some corporal punishment.

Michele,

This has to be one of my all time favourite reads written by your lovely self. They way you weave us around the story line is simply delicious. I do hope that you will revisit Mila again some time soon, fancy reading another episode of her and Sarah smooching together. Hhhmmmm relish 💋

Hugs. Kathryn.

This has become one of my favorite series. The world and intrigue are very well built without anything ever feeling out of place. I personally categorize these types of stories as "accidental transition" stories and this is way better than every similar story I've read.

Love this story. Please write another chapter. I always thought that her sister would be a great way for them to have children maybe in exchange for added perks for each child. I can see Mila being a great mom and Peter a doting daddy. :D The naughty side of me also wants to see Peter spank Mila for doing something bad, maybe to tame her curiosity.