by JazCullen
HOT! This is awesome! I just love your mind and the way you spin stories. I see another amazing series ahead of us and can't wait for MORE!!
i like this one but i wish you would go back to the story about mara and demetri!!!! i cnt wait any longerrrr!! lol :b
I enjoy all your stories - and this is no exception - although I have to agree, I am waiting (albeit impatiently) for more of Mara's and Demetri's story. You are a wonderful writer..
Okay so this is going to be an interesting story i can tell. I like the twists at the end.
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Im so hooked on Mara and Demitri please give another installment dont really like vamp stories but what can i say your talented. PLEASE go to mara and Demitri . please
Please do more research before using Irish, either language or folklore... as an Irish person and Gaelic speaker it's very hard to enjoy a story if there are annoying references or words used inappropriately. Great story though!
you are an amazing author. Every one of your stories is mind boggling and wonderful. I'm always in awe. Keep up the wonderful work.
...but I've yet to meet a naturally golden, curly haired person with naturally long, thick, *black* lashes, and since this is in the early 1800s, I'm guessing mascara wasn't readily available. Sort of yanked me out of the narrative. Still liked it, though.
Your previous anonymous critic may be picky about this possible anatomical anomaly but, the story wasn't harmed by it. I find your story spellbinding ( pun intended). I love your clearly thought out characters and consistent attention to detail and continuity. I'm not even bothered with the grammatical errors I found, even those that got past your editors. Hey, we're all human (hehehe).
I love this story series and want to hear more.
^..^ Chuck
You have grabbed my attention in a big way. I almost didn't stop to add a comment I so want to get to chapter 2. My comment "I'M HOOKRD"
Great effort here author! Brilliant start to something different. I'm loving it.
Please tell the rest of Summer and Nathaniel's story!!!!!
What a way to get a girl all hot and bothered. Nothing wrong with a few less hours of sleep...onward!!!!
will there ever be a reckoning, a revival. TK U MLJ LV NV
All insipid quips and criticisms on non-essential shit aside....thank you for the FANTASEEEEE Sensai! A story well told and well started, not a damn history lesson or science text people....It's YOUR universe JZC and etc...etc...etc... !!! Xp
I wonder if this is one of the reincarnations of Callain and Ana? I liked it and am now onto the next chapter
I've actually finished the series (in one sitting), but I returned to comment and rate the first chapter as well. This chapter was good as well, but I moved on to chapter 2 before I had to stop to comment.