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by ChuckDickins

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EsbanosEsbanosover 3 years ago
Thoughts

Clearly you didnt get Charles Dickens talent for story building or lenght of story

DwaynedomentntDwaynedomentntover 3 years ago
Good beginning

Good beginning, hopefully you continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Very nice start

This is not only a good start to your story but also a nice start for your first story. The unexpected cliffhanger both surprised and delighted me as it leaves you with so many possibilities and directions. Please continue and I look forward to your future posts/stories.

Mitchell

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Trying my best to write as well as possible. Looking for people willing to proofread/edit. Can contact me at ChuckCharles1812@gmail.com. Thank you for checking me out!