All Comments on 'The Fun & Risks of an All-Over Tan'

absolutely lovely, next chapter soon I hope :)

thank you so much for your time , writing !

carrie

Loved the story, the characters and you portrayed the hesitancy so well.

Really good

Thank you

Not your best work ever but the characters were fun.

Thanks for writing. Will there be a part two?

I do believe that Vince is the first one to start an affair! And probably not his FIRST one!

I really love the emotional connection between the characters. Makes the story so much more interesting and hot!

Would love to read more chapters.

I agree with the previous anon that this isn't your best work: the beginning's a bit slow and the dialogue is cringe-worthy at points, among other things. Under normal circumstances I'd give this 4/5, but you're getting five stars because I'm a big fan and I want to help you win the Nude Day contest. Can't wait for your next story!

A lovely and cute story that could go on for many chapters, and hopefully does!

Thank you!

L

I thought Vince could be having the affair. But that is fine. I would love to join the ladies. seems so real.

Exactly the quality of writing I expect, when I read "by ScattySue".

Very enjoyable well written story, thank you.

Gay Kat.

A very enjoyable story and Hope Sue you will bring another Chapter of this Love Story please.

Really love this honest and hot history

I must have submitted my comment incorrectly since it is no longer here.

The story was ok but not up to the standard I am used to seeing. I look forward to the next offering from this amazing writer.

It was a little abrupt.... not for a fling but for a romance. It was as well written as always, but I would have preferred more time for them to develop their love.

Nice erotic story, as noted in some other reviews the love element could develop over a longer time but a great story none the less. I will be looking for part two... And three... :)

Thanks for taking the time to write this and share it with us!

Al from New Zealand

A nice hot story, enjoyable and erotic. Susie's emotional connection could have developed over a few more days perhaps to make it more realistic but I enjoyed the build up and can think of the many erotic games Sue and Nix will explore in the next few weeks.

A great read

Thanks for the many supportive and encouraging comments.

Yes, I could have both made the build up longer and developed the story further but, unfortunately, with the deadline for the Nude Day competition looming I had to write less than I might have liked.

However, Part 2 is being written and is probably around three-quarters complete. I don't want to give any spoilers but Susan did act impulsively in sleeping with Nix so how will the consequences play out?

Serendipity---the pleasure of scanning the story lists and finding a new ScattySue. Perhaps my critical faculties are fading with age but I can't really agree with those readers who think this tale below your usual standard (perhaps it's because they are used to seeing longer and more leisured stories from you). As usual, your story is pure pleasure to read. I might have to keep my Roget's Thesaurus by me to find different words to praise your work (bit pedantic but so what?). Keep up the good work, Sue, I'm looking forward to the next chapter(s),

Brian

Found this to be an enjoyable read. The development of a quick romance is not so unbrlievable. Susan is in a sexless marriage and as such will have been ready for romance. It could have as easily triggered the the parcel delivery man. But in your story Nix unlocked Susan's passion and that is plausible.

I liked the bit with the postal driver, great read so far.

Magnificently judged pace following the tide of events you imagine and describe

Ch. 02 please

Eff

I just wish I was the delivery driver when they came running up, but vince had better watch out he might just be replaced

Just a perfect story, rare on Literotica in my experience. I just love how it elicits a feeling of love and lust with a wonderful plot that takes my thoughts to all kinds of places. Really, this needs to continue, with more encounters and the further development of their relationship. Naturism is liberating, revealing more than the physical and an expression of authenticity. I am eager to read more of your work, as this was an inspiration to be "real". I hope that it does not matter than I am a man and yet not gay because I believe women, when they allow themselves, are more socially adept, mature, and in touch with their feelings. Growing up, I found it so boring to hang out with uncles and other male guys who were superficial, lacked depth and never in touch with their identity. So I hung out with adult women and as I grew up this was always the case. It was not for sex, but intimacy and both intellectual as well as the ability to share of themselves, their dreams, and occasionally the often suppressed inner selves. Your story illustrates this so effectively and it is what I miss in my current life. Enough about me. Thank you so much for the story and I will smile as I think about it for some time. This kind of intimacy and authenticity conveys a freedom and liberation. I have had conversations with women like your characters at a naturist beach I used to visit on Cape Cod. Oh, how I miss those times. Thank you and be well. Thank you for sharing in such an insightful way. professordek

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Beachcomberguy

You have used some profile I saw in your Valentine story and yet the burn was much faster. Liked your descriptions of experiencing naturism. The clubs may say it's nothing special to be nude but as your protagonist describes, it's a very sexy feeling. So well written.

Couple of comments.

1) Why are so many newbie lesbians treated like shit by their husbands and boyfriends? What about natural attraction and a gradual change in orientation?

2) This went way, way too fast. Within an hour, maybe two at most, she has done a 180. You seemed to be rushed to get a sex scene in there. Not at all believable.

Sue another beautiful story. You have spoilt me and only want to read your contributions.

Please write more so that I don't run out!

Great story

Does such "love" really works or is it like old man and a sirene a short living get togehter ...... Love or real love or better a soulmate can truly jump over big gaps , so may Nix and Sue do ...... 💝💝💝💝💝

Excellent story. The roles can certainly be reversed, it happens all the time in long-term relationships. I wish you hadn't stopped writing. I hope it was nothing serious that caused it.