All Comments on 'The Bimbo App - The Naughty Mommy 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

You called the daughter April in mid story?

vanillafieldsssvanillafieldsssalmost 2 years ago

Never known any 18 yr olds to talk like this

BH54BH54almost 2 years ago

You would think these authors would at least read what they had written. I guess it's too much to ask.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The girl talking like that was too over done. It took away from the coming lust. Ridiculous

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Fun chapter to Start

MidnightHour_MidnightHour_almost 2 years ago

That's not how hymen's work! Great story otherwise though...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Loved the story line, great concept.

The incestuous sex was hot, but all spoilt by Alice's dialogue, she is a bimbo not a child.

lexlogan8lexlogan82 months ago

A little drawn out and repetitive, but still worth five stars. I wrote a mother-daughter mind control story and was looking for other examples (to see if mine was reasonably distinct) and was pleased to find this one.

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Erotic author been writing since 2013. I've had two stories blocked by literotica for being written by AI, Bimbo App Santa's Naughty Gift 3 & Mommy's Incubus Son Comes of Age 14. That one was rejected 4 times despite my protests. Talked to site admin and she just sent me a lin...

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