by mypenname3000
I enjoy alot of your stories. Just my opinion but they don't need to end every chapter with a cliffhanger. It almost makes me want to give up.
One of the other readers commented about the cliffhangers at the end of the chapters...wants to quit reading the stories...cannot bear the waiting...??? Oh, well...
I, myself, appreciate the buildup to the next chapter...
Like, now...Zaritha sent the young Japanese man to his death...he is going to have vaginal sex with Fumi, not knowing she is a succubus, and fulfilling Zaritha's spurring him to 'have some fun'...And Zaritha is gonna get a very large, ugly surprise from Fumi...the artifact will be used to protect and defend "the family"...
On to the next!
The story itself is compelling. The incest, ass licking and ass-to-mouth strongly suggest a need for counseling. Seriously dude, no more butt licking or cock sucking after ass fucking.