All Comments on 'The Battered Lamp Ch. 10'

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BadofboneBadofboneover 2 years ago

Why is it that only the woman and futanari have any real agency in this?

Sl33pingforestSl33pingforestover 2 years ago

Rip was hoping Kyle would end up fucking brit

RuckinLguardRuckinLguardover 2 years ago

Aaliyah modified the car for sex in the past (outside the dojo), so it apparently falls under hearth and harem. Why didn't she just repair it on the bridge?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Went from interesting to silly to absurd in 2 chapters

anubeloreanubeloreabout 2 years ago

How the hell is healing not hearth or harem? He can't fuck his harem if they're injured, after all. It dinnae make sense!

MADDOGINTEXASMADDOGINTEXASabout 2 years ago

Only **4** stars for this one...not terribly engaged by the drama of the story...

Plus, Fatima's being spellbound HURTS...she needs fixing, sooner than later, please...

Burke should die an ugly and painful demise...along with the new coven member...wanting to cause a Djinn like Aaliyah such harm...shame on them...

lujon2019lujon2019over 1 year ago

The thing that always bother me about these stories is the "i have unlimited power, I know I have enemies that want to kill me, i'm just gonna ignore that until somone winds up dead, and then i'm gonna ignore it again, for . . . . . . reasons?" story arc

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