All Comments on 'The Battered Lamp Ch. 01'

An excellent start. Looking forward to more.

An amazing tale. Please continue with this. 5 stars

Followed, love the way this is developing, looks like it will be a great storyline...

Interesting. Not the typical Genie story and a lot going on here.

ok it was just getting good and ended......now i wait to see if you keep going

Love the story . AAAA+++

Well written. 5 stars!

Great read!!! Looking forward to reading this chain!

Wow, just wow. That was one hell of an opening...

6 stars, great chapter with a lot of plot and sex, usually we get one or the other. Can't wait to see in what kind of trouble awaits them.

Does Reed James know you're posting his story here?

Outstanding! Can’t wait to see what Happens next

Interesting way of inserting the prologue into chapter one. Any other substantial edits (besides the obvious ones going from STO to Literotica)? In other words, is it exactly the same, or have things changed enough for it to be more than just a reread for people who read it on STO?

It should be: pussy peeking between sleek thighs. It was correct in the first version. Enjoyed the story the first time and will re-read to see the improvements, I still have it in my library as an epub.

Interesting take on the Djinn...

Very good chapter. Good foreshadowing 4/5 stars.

Ah, yes...a sci-go sex story...

Being a Frank Herbert/Isaac Asimov/etc fan, I love stories like this...I see a simple start to this, yet there WILL BE power unleashed, Good vs Evil, AND 💘 LOVE abounding between Kyle and Aaliyah...

**5** Stars....🌋🌋🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌⚡⚡

Looking forward to reading more!!!

Aladiin's lamp the hot way. Liked your version. Outside of Disney version and I Dream of Jeanie TV series. I've only read one other version. A scifi version. This story would make a good Scifi/fantasy, Romance, Young Adult novel.

Question: Could Kyle have his Genie create multiple homes (hearth) for him, then he sells them and uses the proceeds to live on? The Genie seems to be able to create food and clean the house. Cash proceeds from the sale of houses for other living needs (Cars, medical care, etc.) The Genie continues to acquire pussy (harem) for him as he desires. No need to go to college with this strategy. No need to risk his life in the ROTC/Army. Now just need to find the solution so Kyle doesn’t die fighting whatever war the Genie wants him to fight. He might try having the Genie disprove all Religions as that is what they seem to be fighting over. Peace in the Middle East and Kyle could take credit for that. I would try to work toward that strategy.

Good start. One jarring note, in talking about the incense it says his mom burned it and Kyle got to like it, then it says "before she passed."

But his mom's alive.

So either his grandmother burned it, or you meant his mom passed her love of it on to him.

Otherwise good start... though I might have opened with the prophecy.

A nice start, I'm curious to see if the opposition provides challenge, as the djinn seems to be able to just insta bend all women to his will.

He might try having the Genie disprove all Religions as that is what they seem to be fighting over. Peace in the Middle East

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All wars are fought over population pressures and resource access. Religion, nationalism, culture - are just convenient covers and rallying points

Don't read this story! The author fucks it up by turning the protagonist into a cuck. Something that exists only to be a sad little simpy paypig raising other men's children...

Enjoying the story a little until bam: incest. 1/5

I'm also confused about his mom. I'm just assuming it's actually his step mom he lives with

This might get interesting.