All Comments on 'Temporary Boyfriend Ch. 10 - End'

by SteveWallace

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Carnes8004Carnes800430 days ago

Really nice story. Thanks. Stay safe.

AardieAardie29 days ago

Yeah, you covered a lot here but it doesn’t feel like the end.

AccelarVesterAccelarVester29 days ago

The man leads a charmed life but not much conflict. Perhaps for the Rest of the Story.

amritaloveramritalover29 days ago

Thanks for another great story! There is plenty of room for more. I hope you pick this up again.

LeRoyEdwardsLeRoyEdwards29 days ago

Great, enjoyable story!! I will have to check out your other works.

WoodencavWoodencav29 days ago

Lovely storey, thank you for your writing. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AmbulAmbul29 days ago

I loved the story, but it seems you may not be done with it.

texstertexster29 days ago
Sounds like a flashback

These past few chapters, with almost all positive things, sounds like an older person retelling “the good times” while glossing over the tough stuff…I could see a return to the series where things go pear-shaped.

AnonymousAnonymous28 days ago

The story ran out of steam. Can't award more than 3 stars for this final installment.

AnonymousAnonymous28 days ago

I'm pleased it's over, it was certainly fading.

AnonymousAnonymous28 days ago

Great story, not what I would do personally, but a great read!

AnonymousAnonymous28 days ago

Please keep going. Do they have kids? Do they get a house? Lots of loise ends to tie up.

HOG57headHOG57head28 days ago

Great story- thanks for writing and thanks for sharing

Hugo999Hugo99928 days ago

Very enjoyable series

AnonymousAnonymous26 days ago

This could continue with the twin incestuous sisters to tease their husband about how he felt when he caught his parents swinging. Did he get excited seeing his own dear mother getting fucked. Did he fantasize about her? Then they would tease that they wonder how her pussy smells and taste like then they emphasize by licking their lips.

RocketRyedRocketRyed6 days ago

Great characters. Fun read. Looking forward to more stories from this family.

AnonymousAnonymous3 days ago

I enjoyed the series….so far. I agree with one of the Anonymous comments - what about kids? What about the house? Need more.

Earle

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A note on Porn Star next door. I keep getting kickbacks from Literotica without knowing why. Persevere: I will edit chapter by chapter until they deem it acceptable to publish. It just won't be as good. A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A ...