by m_storyman_x
Excellent story Sman, well paced and written. There were details about the characters, but not too many, just right!
Well done.
S
Great story, I was thinking about it a day after I read and it dawned on me what the wife said at the end of the story. haha a nice twist gosh I would love to hear this story told from the wife's perspective to find out how many lovers she tried before she found her husband!
if he refused the neighbor in the cloak room, but didn't even hesitate at the 2nd hole, what changed? if the wife had been so freely sharing herself, why was she angry?
Please don't follow the sorry practice of other LW authors, Brit, or not. Use the character's name, not, "my wife."
Loved your story! Very well written. Did you ever do a follow up with the running girl? Or more stories with the wife and sister in law? I'd love to read those as well.
An oldy, but goody, right. Well I would have had the the wife checked for STDs, because I don't think she is just fucking girlfriends, when you are on the road. You are either the most niaeve guy out there, or you don't give a shit where her pussy has been. She and her sister are fucking everyone on the planet, and you are paying the bills. You pay for those parties too! Your story is hot, and well written, but if it's true, you have a moment of silence out here from us guys that may have fucked your wife.
XYZ
Nope. Would divorce the wife if she’s been with others at this party or other occasions. There was a bet for the wife to tell the difference between men. So, nope. She’s toast and gone.
Another one where you won't use the wife's name. My wife, my wife, my wife. Crap.
Ended up not particularly caring for it. First of all I'm old school, so -1 for shaving and I don't like stories when they make the husband out to be stupid.