All Comments on 'Spring Break Ch. 05'

to end a fantastic series. Sounds like the perfect spring break vacation, wish they had it in some brochure.

The subtitle of this story is misleading. There are actually two more parts to the series. This is the last chapter in which all five of the principals appear. Sorry if I caused any confusion.

This was a great story. Made me feel like i was there with you.. could there maybe be another series to go along with this once everyone goes home ?

i haven't read the last two parts yet, but i know those are just gonna leave me wanting more, too. this is probably the best series i've read on this site. amazing character development, suprising depth... i've never felt as connected to erotica story characters as i do with these five. katie and carl not as much, but the other three.... it's just.... so so well written. really.

GR8 read, really luved it.

"Her channel was well-lubricated from her own excretions" I really hope you meant secretions.

The story unfolds with amazing sincerity and depth.

still don't know "The Invisible man's" name, LOL

DKP

Great buildup to the orgy (and realistic too). I never participated but i had a couple college friends where something like this happened and another group that tried to jump straight to this and it failed - badly.

Loved it. This is just about every guy's fantasy come true!