All Comments on 'Sister's Obsession'

Lots of potential here. As it sits, it is relatively incomplete but there are so many directions this story could take. And I assume you are already considering them. Nice start!

Wow so hot. More please. Eager to read where this goes from here. Well done.

Fantastic! Would love to read more. Thanks

Needed to train her in the fine art of fucking!

Beautiful ❤️. Can't wait for the next part 💕💕

Very sweet sexy start to an incestual love affair ❤️

O to think of the good old days. What a nice story. I to had sex with my sister till she got married. I miss her dearly but know she has a life to live now with her family. Look forward to the next chapters.

Very heart warming story deserving many more chapters. Thank you.

Excellent story, hopefully the first of a multi-chapter story.

No fucking. A BJ is not enough. Fairly well written not the best but adequate. Good luck with your future writing.

Nice story enjoyed reading it. Hope it's not finished there's a lot more in this story yet .

You seem to have developed a really bad habit of never finishing a story. I am unfavoriting you until I see a story marked Part 2.

Awesome story! Like the other comments I hope there’s more

2nd time reading this story. Still great and i hope there is more to come.

I hope there is more. This sucks when it doesn't finish.

love it, more please

Wish you would complete some of your stories. They're great.

You write such great stories, I do hope you continue this one. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

It is every well written and quite erotic. The characters are very appealing, especially Lily. I can't imagine how you will resolve their relationship in an appealing way, but I look forward to more eroticism and hopefully joy.

Just brilliant loved it lots more please