All Comments on 'Scorned'

So far I love all of your stories, please keep writing

I have to be honest - I’d really like to ready what happened after he watched it.

Great story please write more to it and tell us how he felt watching & knowing his wife fucked 3 men and gave him a CreamPie with sloppy seconds ....

I’m with Mikeor Mikey, I think the story would have been so much better if you had written your version, of her showing Alan the video, and the aftermath. Thanks KS

Fair is Fair

Recherche10

Crappy ending. What a twat!

2 stars from Xluckylee for a story that is not finished.

Who gives a shit about Tina, Alan got a younger pussy and he can crap on his now outslut cunt. LOL

By the way, this is the second sto…. tale I read from this wannabe author and recognized not only the mediocre talent but also the lack of ending his drivels. Dude, yah have to wipe yo ass after shitting and don’t forget to flush.

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