All Comments on 'Rag Doll Ch. 08.2.2 - Connections'

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Frankie1952Frankie1952over 3 years ago

BB, I get to thank you once again for making my eyes leak. You seem to do that in most of your stories. The emotion you weave along with the sexy bits all go to make every story you write an absolutely fabulous read. I will wait for your next tale of what men and women do together, whether they should or not is of no consequence to me. Take care of yourself BB. regards Frank

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Wow

All i can say is wow. N now i have to read all ur work. When i find myself scrolling over sex scenes to find out what happens next... thats the mark of a truly talented writer n thats only happened here with 1 other author who never finished his story. So thank u so much keep up the great work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Beautiful story. Thanks

ScottishTexanScottishTexanalmost 3 years ago

Whew! Finally an actual end? Maybe I should keep my mouth shut before I Jinx it! 🤔 Overall, I enjoyed it. But even as much as I like sibling incest stories, the whole freaking family being pervy was too much for me. I'd been happier with only a one or two of the couples 💑 being siblings. Thanks for your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wonderful story!! Well written with a plot. Thank you!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Such an emotional rollercoaster, and I loved it the entire time, thanks so much for this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Someone needs to go over this group of your stories write a script that would set a time line and tie all of them together then divide it into at least half a dozen sesquicentennial pieces (if not more) and then using actors not really known to the public that are cast for the same role in each movie and make them all at on time. The public could use a good love story but don’t write out all the sex ! Wonderful stories!

unclemerv77unclemerv77over 1 year ago

I love everything you have written, I think it all should com under romance and not incest

jvm79jvm79over 1 year ago

Wow

I was throughly engaged with the story, so much so that the sex scenes were skipped.

Your storytelling was engaging 5 stars seems like an injustice to this tale.

Gadf77Gadf774 months ago

Wow, just wow. I think I gave every chapter 5 stars. And like someone else said as well, I ended up skipping the sex scenes as the overall story was quite laden with emotion. I wanna mention though that in the last couple of chapters, keeping track of who's who was getting a bit overwhelming. But aal in all a Great story !!

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