All Comments on 'Quaranteam - North West Ch. 17'

Halfway through I was starting to think maybe it was a filler/fluff chapter to help break up the action, but dang that fire fight was intense. The cliffhanger though, you’re killing me. All in all a great chapter for an even greater story, thanks for sharing with us!!!

intense action, great update, hope for more soon

Time for medevac.

I really like how you write gun fights. Thank you for sharing another chapter.

Good shit ... thanks

Thank you for another excellent chapter. Keep up the good work.

Love this story!

I am begging you please don't make us wait so long after for the next part after that cliffhanger

Thanks for the cast list. I am reading so many different stories it's hard to keep track. 5 of 5.

So good! Damn I've missed this series! Please upload the next part as soon as possible!

Great story! Not much sex but lots of excitement. Will be waiting anxiously for the next chapter.

A great chapter all around, looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Yours is a whole lot better than the original

You write a damn good action sequence.

Kyla is quickly turning into my favorite of the characters in this story. Her arc is really interesting and I'd love to see a chapter from her POV if that's something you feel comfortable trying.

Awesome series. It's clear there's something serious going on now, can't wait to hear what's next.

I agree with Yoowho...better than the original.

As has been said already... A really good story! Keep it going

What a great chapter, you never let us down. Well done!!!!

Scores 5/5

Miriam is 1000% going to be Harrison’s Best Woman for the wedding, and I am here for it

I’m loving the trend of switching around the genders of wedding parties, I myself was a bridesman for my best friend

Just excellent!

To quote someone else: "Good shit ... thanks," indeed.🤔

"now with all the new roads being cut the time was in half.". Err, you going all Yoda on us?

@alsith - RE: Yoda?

It was just missing an comma, it should have read like this, "...now with all the new roads being cut, the time was in half..." As in, now that the trees had been cut down to make way for roads, the travel time was shortened.

Good action and developed nicely.

Fuckin A dude. This story needs to be published as a book cause I would legitimately buy it. This doesn't belong on Literotica. It belongs in Barnes and Nobles