by Spector_Dugan
Finally! It's about damn time that they went all the way. And I'm glad that Krissy made the decision to go for it. 5/5
Love this story. Very inspiring. Paragraph 5 'odd' where you have 'oddly'. Paragraph 12 'thing' where you have 'think'.
So hot, but also it’s also so great that they’re being respectful with each other, and particularly that he’s aware of her boundaries and also pushed the point on pulling out. I mean, that doesn’t happen much on this site… it’s almost a rare fantasy…. now I’m hoping that the twist is that they stay together and she becomes a quantum physicist and not a soccer teacher Mum.
All that buildup, then it was almost anti-climactic!
Good story, keep it going, please.
Thank you.
Love this series. I am calling my shot now, that ugly look was her mad he pulled out instead of filling her up. Krissy needs to get bred!
She seems disappointed he pulled out. She trying to trap him with anchor baby? I have homies that got got like that...
Krissy definitely wants to get bred with the dirty look she had on her face…….great story so far can’t to see if her bf will do the dirty deed and cum inside her pussy.
Kinda wish you would change the chapter descriptions to be unique for each chapter
Excellent writing but I am not sure where you are going to take the story next
Has anybody heard anything from S_D in the last few weeks? He said story parts would be coming out weekly, and it's been a little over two weeks.
No, he stopped posting on his Twitter page. I'm hoping he's just taking a Halloween break.
Outstanding, an extremely erotic sex scene. You write some of the best sex scenes in Literotica. But you are just a damn good writer, period.
I've fallen in love with Krissy. So, you better treat her right.
Sad, sad ending to this chapter...Still, Five**5**Stars for the whole thing!!
There will "probably" be a whole DIALOGUE between Krissy and Jacob in the next chapter, about where this is going, what she really wants; S-D could even pop the surprise that she IS on birth control...or NOT, and does want to be bred by Jacob.
There are a lot more feelings written into this; WE, as readers, have to see it for what it is, and appreciate it for what it is. Krissy is really a sweet girl, deep down, she has to overcome her lifetime of indoctrination to see that she can be herself, have desires like the rest of us!! The facial expressions...that is her...Jake has learn to read more than just that; again D-S has written her body language to be a tell...
Cannot wait for another chapter here!!! Yyyaaayyy!!!!!
It's unlike SD to be gone for so long with no update or announcement of taking a break. Nothing new even on his twitter and he left in the middle of a series. I hope he is ok.
Love your verbal interactions between the two. The sex and pacing excellent. But you character interactions is what draws me to this story. - Vriesea
Now that they have done it in her pussy to an extent, can’t wait for him to eventually cum in Krissy’s pussy bare back, no barriers. I want to see Krissy’s reaction when got coated by his hot seed on the inside for the first time!
One thing: where was her hymen? She didn't seem particularly active physically and she never masturbates, so where was it? Did she pop it herself in anticipation of sex on this weekend away? Enquiring minds want to know!
Shame about the pull out. 9 chapters for a disappointing end to her first time. What a waste. Not hot at all.
Guaranteed this chick goes to College she's going to not be interested in frat boys 😂😂😂.
Guys that watch too much porn think all amarous girls sleep around 😂😂😂.
Krissy turned down almost every guy she met and her boyfriend got nowhere 😂😂😂. Them the facts.
She likes the mc for some reason and she doesnt want anyone else because if she did she just needs to snap her fingers and the local simps and frat simps would be on her 😂😂😂.
You hinted at complications from meeting friends from their past but they didn't arise so from that pov as well as the lack of conclusion to this weekend, and let's face it there are always consequences, here's hoping there is something in the pipeline.
STUPENDOUS! Needs at least one more chapter to finalize her relationship with her mother and Jacob and be rid of all the other wannabees.