by TryAnything
VERY well done. One of the few I actually read, start to finish.
THANK YOU... for entertaining me. ;--)
I can see the scenes back of my mind, such a great narration.
This one is a KEEPER.
This is one of Tryanthing's best. It is well written, erotic and creative. All it lacks is a love character for the daughter. The story hits so many tags that it is very special.
this is a great story. sexy, erotic and very hot. kept me reading from start to finish. 5 stars. wish i could give it 10!
Gave 4 stars. Wanted to do be 5 but I would have liked more sex. Is there a sequel in the works? I would like to follow Tina on a couple of her shoots and maybe another "party". Just my thoughts. Glad you are back posting.
Great story, enjoyable on so many levels. Looking forward to reading and enjoying more of your writing and see how this one continues.
but i'm stunned this story doesn't have a 4.8 or better score. it's unf*cking believable. Very very erotic. maybe too many airheads on this site can't read 5 brilliantly written pages. great job here, TryAnything
Superb idea and a very erotic concept. I just wish you had proof read it to eliminate the mistakes and the repetition, because it would have been one of the best stories on here.
What would have made it even better would have been to include Tina's thoughts. That would have made it an incredible story.
but not for me
it is hard to figure out which category it belongs in
Wow, this touched so many of my hottest fantasies I almost came reading it. Voyeurism, exhibitionism, group orgy, close up fucking, multiple orgasms, bucket loads of hot cum, all as vivid as a video. Absolutely a favourite.
Where did this cum from. Can not wait to read part 2. One of the best stories.
Dear Tina, I don't have $100k or $250k, however I am a 29 year old friend of Issac
and Sarah. Can I be your gopher assistant for a year to work off the fees😀
xxxxcccooooo Had to add another comment myself
As a writer I like your style of writing.
Loved it, especially when she fucked and sucked her parents! Five stars and a favorite point!
Enjoyed this syory so much that i hope you add more chapter to it.
The story is not bad but it's jumbled. I think it would work better if Isaac was the clear main character. Everything that plays out is really his fantasy. He is the one who really wants everything that happens in the story. But he's only a secondary character which makes it hard to identify with him.
Love this one and it looks like others do as well. Please keep the story going since this was setup to allow for many more chapters to follow.
Ridiculous premise and I loved it! This was a fun read and very erotic. Thanks.
I’ve had the soul shaking experience seen of seeing my daughter’s porn. At first it’s very, very disturbing, I could hardly sleep for several nIghts. Then, you can’t not stop thinking about it. Finally I had a VERY private conversation with my beautiful red headed daughter. It ended in the greatest sexual experience of my life. My prize possession is not an expensive sports car but a picture of my beautiful daughter’s eyes looking up at me with her lips wrapped around my cock. I love every inch of that incredible young lady.
Your stories are all pretty good, so far. My one issue with your writing is that you seem to drop the ball at the end. They are always abrupt, and leave the reader wanting more, but not in a good way. In a frustrated 😠 out of nowhere kind of way.
I absolutely loved this story. I have read it twice and masturbated both times. The orgasms were quite intense.
That was a very fun story to read and very well told. You write really well. Looking forward to reading your other stories.
Great and funny story well writen with a nice build-up. The end is far to sudden and leaves the reader hanging.
Fantastic story, the ending was a little sudden and left the reader on a cliff hanger. I hope there is another chapter one day
Wow, one of the best ever. An amazing storyline and soooooo erotic! Continue please.
Great story, loved ever part of it. We are sure that there would be far fewer divorces and separations if more couples experimented in the lifestyle like this