All Comments on 'One More from the Attic Pt. 02'

Fucking hot on all fronts. Sorry that mom wasn't in this one but the aunt and cousins were great! Five stars and a favorite point!

Well done, cannot wait for the next installment !!!

Great writing, as usual. You set the bar high. Keep on writing, I'll keep reading. 5 stars, fave story as always.

regards; max052

Another great chapter!! Can't wait for the next one.

I've been waiting on the edge of my seat since chapter two. This most certainly did not disappoint. It met my expectations and then some. I wasn't expecting the extended family. Great stuff.

Can not wait till the next chapter come out

You just have a way with words, and even if the way the plot evolves is expected I still can't get enough of it.

Hope to see more of this!

Please keep it gong

Bringing Amy into this in such a manipulative way is disappointing as is the sudden Lesbianism from Hope. These fantasy three ways inevitably leave some one out in the end, someone terribly hurt.

Reality would be that the incest couple would never share their intense relationship with anyone. Been there and done that myself, decades ago. She and I would’ve never shared what we had, ever!!!!

So a tad disappointed in the direction this is going. Hopefully it fixes itself in the final chapter and the siblings end up together at last with no third wheel to ruin things.

I do hope these three don't get themselves right in a tangle, and then one of them having to leave the party. I'm getting confused as to who knows what about whom I Hope someone can sort this out before there are 😢. Night 🌙. Hope they still respect each other in the morning.

You're an amazing writer. Just wow. Thank you for your work.

You Asshole!…lol…great tease at the end….great job!

Wargamer nailed it, this felt shoehorned in. You established a jealousy streak, then abandoned it without any actual resolution. Then suddenly Hope is into girls and had their sudden unspoken sapphic history. Still a great series but this felt like fan lip service rather that the story you have been telling thus far. That is not to say that Amy doesn’t have place… this just wasn’t it for me. Still, Thanks for a great piece.

You don't fix roof leaks from inside. You may possibly stop water from getting inside but it's still getting through the shingles and will cause the wood to rot.