by LexxRuthless
for another chapter. I love this series, but I have a feeling the next installment might end it. I guess I'll just have to wait and see.
You know I have been looking forward to this third installment so much and it didn't disappoint! The introduction of Amy at the end is intriguing. There's a number of ways to go with that angle. Before this series ends, however, I want to see Daniel and his Dad spit roast his Mom. It's time to move beyond the silent acknowledgement between the two men and work together again like the attic. You know she'd love it! Looking forward to seeing if anything interesting turns up on the video feeds now the cousins and aunt have the bedrooms.
Sorry, but I was bored after the first page. There was no drama, tension, or eroticism. What made the first two chapters of this story interesting was not knowing how it was going to unfold. IMO you betrayed your writing talent by just writing a fuck-fest.
Loved it!!!
I do hope that Daniel ends up with his sexy sister and not Amy.
Make it so.
Oh man thanks for the great story, many hours of boners here! Please clean up the order in the index, it's hard to figure out the order, other than that great story! Keep on writing!