by BlewWater69
theirs got to be a sequal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great story u have got to write another part though
Poor grammer; unrealistic, too.
You seem to have a knack for writing good stories without ending them. Get with the programm and finish them!
When is the next chapter going to come out ??
You have to continue on with this series it is way too good to just stop it here!!!
I am now eagarly waiting for next chapter.
egarly waiting
Seems incomplete, where is chapter 3?
So many unfinished stories on here, far too many sadly............