by lovecraft68
what else can be said about your hot writing, love it damn you are terrific hot and tasty as always it is a big five so well; done tenbears43an admirer keep on trucking
Hot damn for sure! A lil' Mrs Robinson updated with a much hornier and action minded kid than Dustin Hoffman, the ultimate teenage boy success story to get that Mom he dreamed about.
BRAVO!!!
So the mom is shy and a prude (at least to her ex) but the first chance she gets she is fucking (and talking) like a porn star? Not likely, but maybe she watches a lot of porn. But it's all ok since anything is possible in the world of fantasy.
Definitely a hot story. I didn't score it a 5 because the transition was lacking. She was a prude and shy. Yet despite that she immediately decided to screw a guy as old as her son AND who was a long time friend of her son. The change was too quick no tension.
and she did it quickly and without a problem. Love the story!!! A mom and a young guy with a hungry for MILF and his recovery is fast and she can cum all day long with him
Really enjoyed this one. I would love to read more like this one. It sould have been cool to know the son's reaction to this. Thanks
I liked it. Thanks for your time. Well thought out and in plenty of detail.
Enjoyed the story, Definitely well written, well thought out, and arousing! Thank you.
You did it again, LC68. Another 5 star MILF Tail. I liked how this lady wasn't the hot driven cougar like in your other Tails. She was sweet and had to be drawn out of her shell. Well done, dude.
Great work. You put things such that it makes the reader feel that he is in the story, not just reading it. I put this down as one of, if not my favorite, story (s).
hope u continue with this 1. like what else will she do. really enjoy it alot.hoping for more chapters
Enjoyed his best friend, mom's, and made her birthday a cumming celebration.
Cute and funny in a way. I think you out did yourself on this one 10 stars. Now the very shy lady has turned into a loving tiger we should read more about Robin and Sam. This story really. really calls for a follow up story about them. In my favorites for sure.
Ron
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Really one of the most involving hot stories !!
one of the very best I've had the pleasure of reading u sure do know how to keep a gut hot and horny
All of the allusions to future times this couple will get together would be fun to read about.
Very professional and realistically written!!!!!...
Cheers and thanks for sharing special.moments of a fantasy of reality!
Crazy George
Beautifully written with an excellent plot and graphic details for our brain to visualize! Literally a screamer! Well done!
I normally don't comment. But I must say I mostly enjoy your writings, BUT I quit reading them because of your constant use of ***Damn. It just kills the mood.
As always with your stories, I like the story line and the character and story development. I love the sexual position descriptions and detail. I also love what I call the happy ending with the promise of more sexual encounters to come. I like he use of your colloquialisms.
5 STARS
FANTASTIC !! So erotic - my cock felt as if it were sam's - the lucky sod !!
I loved the characters (as always) and the development of their connection. You’re great with that setup and story growth. Once the fireworks go off, you seem to repeat almost exactly the same dialogs, positions, reactions, etc. - very formulaic, predictable, and thus less effective as the story’s potential starts off with. Your greatest strength as a writer is - IMO - the ability to create characters and out them together. Once the party starts, however, it’s predictable… Also, this one had an extremely high incident of typos, to the point of distraction. Nothing ruins the “theater of the mind” like having to reread a sentence because of a typo. All that to say - please keep it up, keep the stories cuming (couldn’t resist), I’ve enjoyed every piece of yours which I’ve read.
I’m commenting on the whole series. I like the variety of scenarios. The sex scenes and their buildup seemed almost mechanical, very similar in every story. All women do not act the same. The milf’s read like they were written by a man. The characters had no depth to them and were predictable. Essentially this had a cookie cutter feel to it rather a series.
As usual, the situation and the resultant sex was excellent except mostly the sexual portion is quite predictable and, as usual, complete with grammar, spelling, and usage errors that detract somewhat from the story line.