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TXWoodTXWoodover 7 years ago
Just a start I hope

It's a great start with a nice slow buildup. But you should have held on to the story till Menage really meant MENAGE. Keep the next installments coming.

MajorRewriteMajorRewriteover 7 years ago
Good start

I look forward to reading more. Interesting context in a bookstore. Captivating characters.

Lots of plot threads left hanging. How many of the women will our hero fuck? Is his wife fucking around at work? Does the little coffee girl hump with abandon?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Your writing

skills suck.

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Went to school for a long time, got married, got a job, raised a family. The rest is all just details. Please vote and comments and feedback are appreciated.

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