by beachbum1958
I'm glad to see your back. I have missed your writing. I have thoroughly enjoyed all of your tales of familial bonding Please continue.
An outstanding story. It does hint of another chapter, part, episode. Hope I'm seeing and not hoping that. There are only a few who even come into the neighborhood of the skill of Beachbum on this site. An easy but inadequate five stars/ favorite. Keep it up.
what a heart wrencher but a lovely story just the same. Thoroughly enjoyed the read thank you
I'm a sicko and love taboo , however I found myself more engrossed by the characters and not so much the hot sex . And the sex was hot . Well done , I'm hooked
I started to really getting upset at the beginning reading about the snake seducing the mom and the dad seeming to so easily accept her cheating on him in his own home. I can’t tolerate husbands that are so weak they easily give up on their wives. Protect her and fight for her or divorce her, it is as simple as that. Be a man not a sniveling pussy. She’s your wife for Pete’s sake. Here you go again pulling so much emotion out of the reader. The sex in this chapter was great. The younger seducing the older. The clear emotional detail of their buildup to their point of no return. And the climax of getting caught and the resulting confrontation with their, so called, parents was so cathartic. Damn you for your power over the reader’s emotions. Again, well done. Looking forward to the next chapter. I hope their parents get there shit together and the snake gets run over by Scott’s rust bucket.