All Comments on 'Joanne's Fall Pt. 21 - Gang Fucked'

Woha! I love it!

can't wait to read more ahhhh omg! 5stars

Poor Jo! What an experience. It was probably just as well that she was drugged. Watching the video

almost made her sick but she saw that she did have multiple orgasms from all the fucking. Having the video posted on XXXPorn greatly increased the likelihood that Tom would see his mother the whore being (apparently) gangbanged by dozens of men. Could it get any worse!

"Here we go, time to show them my new tits."

I bet that that once Jo gets into her dance routine she will be even more humiliated when her huge pornstar tits make her very popular. In any event she will be making a lot of money for Jason and Claire. Can't wait for the next chapter. This amazing saga shows no sign of slowing down.

I really like the writing style, the sex scenes, but the plot is a little bit repetitive to me. It's not a problem with the author or the story, gave 5 stars, but I think this will be my ending, Jo embracing her slutty way of life and being happy having all the orgasms.

“G?! Jo was already at DD and that was hard enough to maintain! G was fucking huge! Something Jo had no desire to have.”

Jo had natural 36DD that sagged some; now she will be a 36G with little or no sag. When she saw them Jo thought they looked “ridiculous” but were firm with no sag. Unquestionably she now has a pornstar body, decorated with tattoos and piercings - already she is an unwitting pornstar. What will her stripping lead to? Will Jason force newly top-heavy Jo to make porn videos once he finds out about the XXXPorn video? Will she have to find a new gym to maintain her workouts and trim her thighs so she can avoid black Ryan? At her company, will her huge new tits and her slutty clothes make her feel more like a complete whore? So many possibilities for the transformed and further degraded Jo. Love this story and Joanne’s journey into depravity and??

Needs a big finish like a next party!

“She lay on her bed, looking at her big, fake tits. She held onto them with her hands and they felt firm, but pretty nice. Her nipples were constantly hard and pointed out.”

What a delicious detail. Jo has been humiliated again, this time with huge 36G implants, but she thought that they were “not too obviously fake,” and felt “nice.” Her nipples now seem extra sensitive and perhaps more easily aroused. Will Jo discover that she feels more sexy with her new pornstar tits, trim and fit body, even as she did not want any of the changes? In her stripper/hostess job, will her customers think that she is much younger with her huge tits and slim body? Where will this lead?

“Here we go, time to show them my new tits.

She took a deep breath, and went out.”

No matter how degraded and humiliated she may feel, Jo soldiers on. I really like this quality in her character. . Deep down, though, I suspect that she knows she looks good, and this helps boost her confidence.

Another great addition to the story line. Kudos to you. Since Jo has been degraded pretty as much as humanly possible, maybe it will soon be time for Tom to learn of his mother’s secrets and he’s ok with it all, but now expects to have regular sex with her. In hindsight, Jo now wishes she confessed to both Freddie and Tom long ago.

Sorry that one anonymous commenter finds the story repetitive. The story reminds me a bit of the old Little Orphan Annie comic strip, which lasted for decades. Annie was getting into one predicament or another with great regularity. What made her story good was how she coped with the adversity and figured out how to extricate herself from her predicaments (with only infrequent help from Daddy Warbucks). Here the predicaments do occur with regularity, but what Jo/Joanne thinks and feels about each one is what makes her story so believable. How she copes, even if she cannot overcome, is what makes her character so compelling The author has introduced new characters, and new themes throughout the story, so this reader is never quite sure what will come next. One thing is for sure: Jo/Joanne will suffer almost constant humiliation, get a lot of unwanted - and some wanted - sex, and a lot of orgasms as she becomes a slut and a whore - and now a tattooed and pierced bleach blonde stripper with huge tits and a hot and youthful-looking 47-year old body. I think the author is a master of narrative twists and turns, so I find it difficult to think of this story as repetitive. I find it very easy to suspend disbelief in this work and it has become my favorite story.

this writer likes to create hope and crush it. he must be very unhappy just like most of his readers

naaaaaaaaaaaaaaah don't like rape story' and that was what the party was plus its getting repetative

This story has gone on way too long and I would, respectfully, say that it is time to draw it to a conclusion. The latest "episode" was definitely too dark and, by writing more on this thread, you are wasting time when you could be completing/finishing other story lines that were far more enjoyable than this one ever was; please stop now, the story has become gross and ridiculous.

How much further can Jo fall? Perhaps her new tits and new job stripping in Noah’s club could lead to something better, or at least different. Or will her huge new pornstar tits lead her further into depravity? Could porn be her unexpected salvation? Of course Tom will find out that his mother is a slut and whore, but perhaps he has known for some time. Michelle, Alexis, and Dwayne are still out there, but so are Jason, Claire, and the two Ryans. Perhaps Sara is keeping Jo’s company afloat. Who knows what is next for the hot-bodied, tattooed, pierced, and now very big-titted horny slut? The author has kept this reader’s imagination on overdrive with what could happen next.

Honestly I would love to see a spin-off of everything that happened and happens to Michele.

Can’t wait to see what happens next at the strip club.

To anonymous who thinks the author “creates hope and then crushes it” must be reading another story. In this one Joanne/Jo has gone from one predicament to another, each one perhaps worse than the one that went before. Any hope so far is in the reader’s mind; at least in this reader’s mind. Jo just keeps on persisting because that is who she is, even when everything looks bleak. I just hope that at some point her willingness to what she does not want to do will get her off her spiral - or treadmill - of degradation. . I am rooting for her!

To Ambul: yeah, I know it’s a me problem of too much empathy for a person that doesn’t exist (and I’m laughing a little while writing). I’m too invested in Jo’s happiness and she never gets there (the story is not exactly repetitive but it’s like Tom never catching Jerry but doing something different to achieve it), so I’ll stop here while she’s kinda happy, not in jail or living in the streets. As I said, the author is doing an excellent work, and I follow his other stories and will continue.

"What the fuck!!!" She shouted, "You let me get fucked by god knows how many people! I've seen the video! I've seen what they did to me! That's fucking sick!"

Not, beaten down, Jo really let Ryan have it. Jo is totally submissive to Jason and Claire, but has no hesitation dominating white Ryan and exploded to black Ryan over the sex video, now on the internet. And yet, knowing she could do nothing about, reflects that perhaps she is a whore, even if she was drugged and fucked by dozens of men in all her holes. The nuances and range of emotions and thoughts that the author brings out with Jo is astonishing.

Your story is wonderful. You make an exciting presentation. I expect that the next 9 parts will be enough to cover the rest of the events in this story, but the parts must be longer and must update the ideas in the story scenario and talk about her son, her company and her new job, her new friends, her relationships with the community and the neighborhood in which she lives, her relationships. With her former friends and family members, her brothers and sisters, her ex-husband, her current colleagues at work and at the gym, her relationship with Ryan Black and White, her relationships with Niall and Noah. Will Jason want to abandon her and get a refund after they dropped her? It is possible that pornography will turn into a new job for her. Exciting stories like this one attract a group that enjoys the repeated events and slippages of the main character in the story, and another category of readers who imagine that the character is real and that his slippage must be stopped and that he must be saved. Here is the plot and here is the excellence in creating the series of stories. Some readers have come to believe that Joe is a real character if You sent her to prison. In the next part, they will feel sad and resentful and ask you to stop writing the story and finish it until Jo is rescued. When this is the case, you are a successful writer, and your story affects many people. Even those who want to stop it will come and read the next part and come to comment and say, Stop his suffering. Save Jo. He will say, Stop being ridiculous. You have ruined Jo’s life. He believes, by thinking in his mind, that Jo is a real person. I advise you to continue writing the story until you finish all the plots and nodes until it becomes a complete series. Even if you write 20 new parts, the story must be complete, good, and continuous. I respect you as a creative writer

To Anonymous. Don’t completely give up on the story because of your empathy for the MC. I too am apprehensive that the author will take Jo so far down into depravity that there is no possibility of any good coming her way. He has created a very appealing character who, I hope, can retrieve enough to become at least a slut making her own choices about most of her life. Perhaps she is destined to become a popular stripper with huge tits, or a mature pornstar with a killer and extensively decorated body and her huge rack, and have both male and female lovers. Perhaps living with sexy Michelle? Lesbian threesomes with Alexis? And what about Dwayne, with his engaging and supportive personality and “perfect cock?” There is so much to like about this story that I hope you check in from time to time to see if it is moving in a direction you might like.

To Anonymous who asked for a spinoff series about sexy sex slave Michelle. I like that idea a lot! I just finished “Black Office Slave” and hope to see more of that story. In lieu, taking Michelle’s story from here would be fascinating. Right now her character is a gorgeous, slim and sexy pregnant black sex slave and whore and possible lover for Jo (which in this story would be great). I have suggested in an earlier comment that it would be cool if sexy young black Michelle and very busty and sexy white mature MILF Jo would end up together, facing new challenges (of course!) and new sexual experiences . It makes me think of the author’s Twisted Tales series of interlocking stories. Fabulous possibilities!

I hope that this great story will continue until the end of 2024. Continue writing chapters during 2024. What about now that your tits have become huge? You must go buy new revealing clothes, blouse shirts that do not cover your stomach, bikini dresses, tight jeans, denim shorts and crop tops. I send Jo back to the shopping center to buy clothes, and people are walking and watching the huge tits of this porn actress, which they may have watched for a few days. Minutes on a porn website some men want to take pictures with her. During the weekend, Jo goes to nuggets and discotheques tonight. She goes to gamble and drink beer and loses more money, becoming penniless and poorer. Perhaps the owner of the apartment she is renting will come to evict her because she did not pay the rent this month. She goes to stay temporarily in a cheap hotel on the outskirts of the city, and she is dragging two suitcases. She wears her new clothes. She goes to the bathroom. In this hostel, one of the inmates is in the bathroom. He has sex with her, and she gets anal fuck. During the shower with this colleague in the hostel, she goes to sleep in a two-story bed. A woman comes down from the upper floor of the bed and has lesbian sex with her. During her stay in this hostel, Joanne's mind rejects reality, but the truth is that she has become a shameless prostitute, sharing the bathroom and defecating with her colleagues in the hostel, and getting a meal from the food bank, leftovers from people's food, or some pieces whose expiration date is approaching. It is necessary that she be forced to give up her company in exchange for debts. Keep writing, I can't wait any longer to read the new part

Don’t listen to any of the negative comments, this story is great and I hope it continues for a long time. Amazing job and looking forward to the next chapter.

We must think about how to make Jo pregnant with a black child. When the child is born, she breastfeeds him and walks around with him. Send her to the hospital so she comes back pregnant. What about her company? Who is running it now? Is the company still working? Also, it is important. She should get a model guest in the morning. Her pictures will be done. Paste her on the cover of magazines. Jo works for a local fashion house that sells bikinis. Her son sees her picture on the cover of the magazine. What about her dietary habits? Drinking alcohol? Did she previously prefer to eat meat or fruits and vegetables? Do you eat pork regularly? Do you eat pizza and burgers? I enjoy when I watch Claire take Joanne goes to the bathroom and puts the hose in Joanne's ass and pumps water into it. Joanne must keep her ass clean always. Also, when she is forced to marry an illegal black immigrant, he can have a child with her and obtain citizenship through his marriage to Joe. This immigrant is a friend of Ryan. He is there. A wedding for Joanne and she goes on vacation to Asia and visits her new husband's relatives in Africa

Don't keep me waiting, post the new chapter quickly, what a motivating story

Very good story

What will happen in the strip club? I am eager to know what follows. Strip clubs have wealthy patrons from the Middle East and Asia. Selling Jo to a strip club in the Middle East or Asia will make Noah profit a few thousand dollars. Half of this money will go to its master to pay off its loan. It may be sold for a few months in exchange for... Thousands of dollars There are good customers in the other part of the world who have millions of dollars

It is possible to work as a dancer there. The dancers there make money, earning $3,000 a night

hard to imagine what's next but i am waiting

love your writing style

Jo has apparently completely recovered from her porn debut at Ryan’s drug-fogged gangbang when she started work for Noah’s strip club. I doubt if Jo’s hostess and lap dancing customers at the strip club would guess her age. From the story so far, with all the weight loss and gym work, and even before her breast enhancement, she could sometimes pass for 30-ish. We don’t know how Jo does her makeup now. Did Claire instruct her on appropriate slut and whore makeup? Has Jo adapted it to make her look younger and sexier. She does like how she looks when she looks in the mirror. Presumably she does apply makeup, eyelash, eyebrow treatment, and keeps her pussy shaved smooth, but I am again guessing. I personally find all this highly erotic. I think from what the author relates of her thoughts and feelings, Jo does want to look young and sexy, even if she must wear revealing and slutty attire, which she resents. The young Ryans certainly found her very sexy and Karl’s young whore thought she looked to be about 30 years old. Her bleached blonde hair added to her youthful looks when she was whoring and definitely will work for her as a very sexy stripper and lap dancer. The tattoos and piercings, where they show with her skimpy stripper costume and really big 36G tits, add to her exotic and erotic appearance. I suspect that Jo may get lot of unexpected enjoyment from her transformed and decorated body and bigger tits as she strips, hostesses, and performs lap dances for her customers at Noah’s strip club. No doubt the author will have a lot of surprises with Jo’s new body and her new job - Jason and Claire also must have plans for their white sex slave now that she has her new pornstar tits. Why do I find all this interesting? The author, I suspect, has made Joanne’s physical transformation an important component of all that is happening to her, and it really makes the story and Jo very three-dimensional.

Every time a new plot is presented, the focus on Joanne rejecting herself is interesting, but you have not told us after all these modifications. Joanne resembles any pornographic film actress? It is very fun for her to go to the beach and sleep for a whole day in a bikini to become a brunette. When the day ends, one of the boys or girls recognizes her and invites her to a party on the beach with his colleagues, or she asks an old man lying next to her to rub her body with tanning oil. At the end of the day, she gets tan lines. Her master calls her this morning. Next, after she spends the night at the party drinking beer, to punish her, he replaces the tongue nail with a penis-shaped nail, pierces her navel and eyebrows, puts a tattoo in the shape of stars and love hearts around her anal opening, throws her old formal clothes in the trash and replaces them with revealing clothes, and sends her to sleep with his shemale friend who works. A porn actor, this shemale finds that Joanne has a similarity in appearance to one of his street prostitute friends. He then plans to steal Joanne's identity and rescue his street prostitute friend from the gang she works with. He steals Joanne's ID card and takes advantage of his connections in the government office. He places a picture, fingerprints, information, and a signature. His friend, a street prostitute, takes on the identity of Joanne, and he imprisons her in the basement for several weeks to brainwash her and convince her that she is not Joanne. She decides to accept this in order to free herself and begin her other slides. She may go to prison, or the gang chases her, or she loses her money, or her family chases her. She loses her talent in CV. As a former entrepreneur, she loses any opportunity. To survive and try to regain her identity, wonderful story paths could be presented through this adaptation. I hope to see this work for Joanne. In general, your story is great and worth reading daily

You need to develop the scenario and make the story words a little longer, 40,000 characters. This is an appropriate number so that you can present Jo better in each story. I love this story, even though I read your other works, but this story is the best ever, and it may be the best in its section on the website for me, so I wait daily for your new chapter to be released.

I hope the next chapter comes out fast.

i assume that the real money is made by lap dances performed by the scantily-clad hostesses. I can imagine a scene in Noah's strip club where a repeat and well-healed customer asks for "the hot blonde hostess with all the tattoos and the amazing huge tits." He might follow-up and ask "Is she older than most of the girls? she has a killer body and with her blonde hair and makeup I could not tell if she was over 30."

Such a scene could lead anywhere. Might a customer ask for additional services not offered by the club? How would Jo respond if such a request was made of her or through a bartender? How humiliating, but is Jo a whore? What if she (again) had no choice? The strip club certainly offers new challenges for busty slut Jo.

I know you post a chapter every two weeks but god I hope the next one comes out sooner because this story is amazing.

The story is enjoyable, but the story must be developed and the events in the new parts must be better linked with the events in the previous parts.

I suggest that you design a new series of this story. Each new part represents a new scenario and case for Jo, for example, as some readers and commentators suggested, to start with pornographic films and another part about Jo going to prison. Another part about Jo’s sadistic life. Another part is that Jo’s breasts are injected with hormones until she gets... Milking to breastfeed a number of children, part about Joe traveling to get more tans at a resort in a neighboring city, part about losing her company, part about events at the club, part about him going to the mall, shopping and buying clothes.

I suggest that you focus your efforts more on writing this story and writing it as one of your best stories.

It is interesting that the number of words in the story is more than 30,000, for example.

It is desirable to publish a part every week or 10 days. Sometimes you publish one part every month.

If you invest your effort in writing this story well, developing it, and developing its ideas, you may turn it into a book in the future or translate it into languages such as Portuguese or French, for example.

It's really an amazing story

Wish you would let her get revenge on these scumbags!