All Comments on 'Joanne's Fall Pt. 04 – Marked'

just another story about sea

If she is a big girl, when Claire gets her alone eg like her place, Joanne could just punch the shit out of her. Once down and tied/cuffed, a bit of torture will soon have her giving all the info required. This is just some fantasy.

The male blackmailer to me is not interesting or needed in this story anymore the most interesting is when Claire is in charge. I know it is because how you write and could easily change the dynamic when you want, hopefully for me it will keep seeing Claire staring as Mistress, as she can do more in more places giving more humiliations. I normally don't like tats or piercings but you did an excellent job with this one, I never thought of just one nipple piercing and I loved it, good job there. The one thing I hope you will show us sometime soon is the relationship between the blackmailer and Claire. Thank you for sharing your fantasy with us.

Pappasleaze!

Keep going I am enjoying this

Great but she needs more piercings and a few tattoos as well.

Lovely story. Can’t wait to read the next chapter. How does Joanne’s son react to her changes. Hope she gets more markings and probably a stylish undercut hairstyle.

Excellent in all ways but typos...your proofreader merely needs to observe spellcheck here and there. Wonderful humiliation. Glad you didn't overdo the piercings, plenty of time for more. It will not be easy to hide such submissiveness from the son and husband, but the author is creative so I am hopeful.

I absolutely love this series. Every chapter so far is very hot.

Great story. Love the mystery fuck after the bunny branding piercing. A few labia rings might heat things up.....

Excellent. Many thanks for this wonderful story. Five stars.

PP