by Spector_Dugan
Please don’t let us wait long for the next chapter. Two weeks to get a chapter with no sex is rough
Interesting so far. Will there be human on non-human action or strictly human on human?
I'm surprised I liked this set up.
I'm usually against coercion and manipulation, I guess since everyone involved is affected equally made a bit of a difference. I do hope that as the story continues things work out well enough. I'm looking forward to see how this plays out.
This is quite the wild scenario you have presented us. I am intrigued where it goes from here!
Love it. As my name suggests you can guess what I'm going to request Next.
They ask for Thier Clothes back.
The Monotone Voice says: Here is your Clothes Back, But we have made some Modifications.....
Now all the clothing only Covers from the waist up with a Neat Hem stopping right at the waist.
I'm a big fan. I check up on your profile pretty regularly. The interplay of guilt, lust, and release is fantastic. It's always uncomfortable to step out of your genre, but this is an exciting premise. It just needs more time spent on characterization. The quickest way to ruin the characters is to make them 2D caricatures. Maybe focus on a few couples as the rest just exist in the periphery until they interact with the established characters. Looking forward to more.
Just wanted to say I agree with Anon's comment below. I really enjoy your stories, the hesitance and fear which is then overcome by desire - it works every time. Every story is better when the reader gets to know who the characters are as people, but I don't feel like I know these characters at all just yet. Hopefully, this is a long series where we will learn more about the characters, Natalie and Adam especially. A really interesting concept though, can't wait to see where you take it!
There’s a lot of characters here, it may be hard to connect with them all. But goddamn am I excited about the pairs you’ve laid out. Brother and sister, teachers and students, nerds and popular girls, and especially people being pairs with their SO’s best friend. There’s so much potential and I know your stories are always great but hopefully you can handle so many characters well enough.
Also I agree please post the next part ASAP since this was only a prelude.
Anyone know any other stories like this one I just can’t wait for the next one to come out
Okay …amazing start as ever. Looking forward to how this builds.
I would class this as unnerving but intriguing.
Non-consenal non-consent.. Emotional rape..? Promises an interesting read. Great set-up!
The aliens got rid of/left behind several potential genetic contributors just because they weren't quite old enough yet? They could have been sequestered until they turned 18, they could have potentially mated among themselves (it's not illegal if both parties are minors), or the group could have been told to forget the age-of-consent laws they had been inculcated with.
One of the best setups I've ever read. I can't wait to see how the personal dynamics develop. So far (if my math is correct) we've only been introduced to seventeen of the students. This is going to be very interesting. 5/5* Fav
Quite the unexpected setup, falling under non-reluctance. Interesting start! 5