by manyeyedhydra
wtf why is it always "the South" that gets targeted? Shit happens in other places, too, you know.
I remember going to Amsterdam once. The Red Light District was meh. I certainly wasn't interested. But I did like the fact that yogurt came in packages 4 times the size of the ones here in the US.
I always read your well-written stories, but I'm often not sure if I enjoy them!
Thanks, anyway.
Oh I like this a lot. It’s got that great Hellraiser feeling, the barren numbness of hell or some hell-like dimension. Bravo!
Your political views definitely mar this story. Sad, cuz I find your stories enjoyable. Maybe stuck to the smut.
Political views? The main character has strong views, for sure, but he's just a character. You're getting his views not mine. I try to be equal opportunities with who I feed to succubi nowadays. :)
too many pages dedicated to walking around corridors. Not one of the better stories. Still good to see something non exactly HHOH related.
AHHHHHHHHHH loved it loved it LOVED IT. Perfect Halloween story. Got my rocks off HARD. I loooove your DESPAIR. And, honestly, it's just super bleak, and immersive, in the worst way, and by that I mean the best way. Good work with your take on the backrooms, and how this one hurts people in that very specific way. It's weird how sexy you make hopelessness, but I'm soooo into it. Love your other work too!!! Thanks!!!
Can people really stroke to this? I am not judging I just... I feel like an anti boner now. Like I should volunteer at hospitals, fight crime, call my mom. An endless red light district that steals pieces of your identity and provides no fulfillment? That....uh.. sure is some imagination you got there Mr. Writer! Yep. Nobody here but us chickens. Happy fulfilled chickens.