All Comments on 'In Love with Lori Ch. 07 Pt. 02.2'
by beachbum1958
- 15 Comments
ender2k2kover 5 years agoVery well done. Thanks. I look forward to your next offering.
Geisha1over 5 years agoI just love this story. What a well written, fun, sexy tale. You sure you can’t write more? It’s just too good to end! 5 stars, a fav
goducks1over 5 years agoi loved it from the beginning. i hate to see it end. a fantastic beautifully written and very sexy story. 5 stars - again. Lori and David and clan were very special characters - and its going to be hard to not read their escapades any further. Thanks for all the entertainment. Well done!!!
Anonymousover 4 years agoLove your style and hate let go of these characters.
I'm in love with Lori too. Very few stories have moved me to tears, but your stories have. This one and the Shining Girl series, especially.
Please consider expanding these delightful love stories.
Anonymousover 4 years agoI'm an American with no British experience, but I relate easily too your lively narrative style.
Would love to see the Vargas-style renderings of Lori, Teruko, Sai Fong, and Linda
Anonymousover 2 years agoOne small negative: Sorry, babies dont have green eyes! They are all milky blue - their true colour takes a long time to assert itself! Other than that - a great story
Anonymousover 2 years agoMy daughter was born with green eyes, just like her mother's, the sclera of her eyes were milky blue at birth, that changed over time, but she still has green eyes
Anonymousover 2 years agoDon’t know how but this needs to be a movie or a series of movies with Davies friends and their sister/wives and all the interconnected stories . The Shining Girl series should also be tied in.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoGreat story, I couldn't stop reading it until I was through it all. If there was any negatives, I went right through them and they didn't even register.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoGreat story - rereading.
The only thing that strikes me as a little "odd" is that Richard and Hugo got married in Denham Hall. After the horror stories connected with that place that struck me a "peculiar" to say the least. I would have figured that was the last place they'd want to hold the ceremony.
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