All Comments on 'Heart of a Demon Ch. 01'

KEEP IT COMING GIRL, IT REALLY IS A NICE STORY.

I like the idea of a witch and an incubus, especially the concept of one who mates for life. However I think this chapter progressed too quickly, more conflict would be interesting and I think he could've stayed for a day. She seemed to decide too quickly. Also I recommend reading this manga which has a similiar story. http://www.mangafox.com/manga/akuma_na_eros/ Maybe it can give you some inspiration. Please keep writing.

I see what you mean about this chapter moving too fast. I'll try and work on that for my next story.

Hope you keep reading,

~Twisted

I loved it! Was a little fast, but it was very entertaining. You should consider writing for an erotica publishing line. Will definitely keep reading this. ;-]

I didn't mind the speed of this chapter. But i'm glad there are others to read because it did end quickly and i did want more. So that's no help. lol.

I enjoyed your story very much. Love the idea of mating for life. A witch and incubus is interesting. Read on i shall.

Nice first chapter :P