All Comments on 'Half Step'

You have caught my interest, now I hope you will post the second part soon.

I think you have a very good start here. It’s well written and an interesting basis. I’ll be watching to see how you bring it forward.

Keep it going!

Let's see where you are going with this. But one suggestion is make it longer than two pages per chapter.

Yes, you also have my interest. Please keep going.

Nice start to your story. Hopefully the rest will be just as good.