All Comments on 'Genesis'

I enjoyed it and was completely sucked in enjoying the charaters and the story line. Then the joke was on me so to speak the reader..... makes me want to hate April Fools day ... But then everyone that reads this story takes something different from it... We humans and our silly customs ... Thanks

The ending, to be more precise. I enjoyed the story, and was actually heart broken when she was taken away.

This would actually be just as good rewritten as a non-erotic science fiction story. It's the play with the mindsets of the characters that really sells it. The unexpected appearance of April Fool's Day was excellent black humour.

I enjoyed the suspense. Where was she. what was she doing there? What was going to hppen and why? Why was she burned? all the answeres were provided to the reader piece by piece. I learned a lot. I am a budding author

I loved it, but honestly didn't love the end. It was just too crushing for me.