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All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 01 Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Subirán más?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I really hope the next chapter is coming soon because stopping mid-fight was annoying...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago
no flow

You write well, but this 1 page stuttering, choppy quasi-rhythm you use is atrocious. And you really need to stop using "Lana Fulmine" already. Anyone who has read this far knows her name already...it's like you're pushing for word count. 3* you can do better...I hope.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I hate cliff hangers else it would have been a 5.

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