All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 01 Ch. 04'

Starting to get bored now. Believe-it-or-not, there is a saturation point for too much sex, and you've hit it here. And the dialogue is rather repetitive, too. "Oh, yes Leo!! Fuck my pussy, which belongs only to you. That's it. Just fuck me hard." Yada yada yada, blah blah blah. There's going to be more story soon, yes? That is to say, more *meaningful* story.

Makes me nostalgic for the old Dungeon Keeper games. also hvnt seen an author use the word demesne since Piers anthony in the 80s

Enjoying it but you had him fucking her arse and filling her cunt. Seems a good trick if you can do it.

I like the concept and mybe even the story line but the sex scenes are very repetetive so far. hopefully that smooths put before I lose interest altogether. Tanks for your efforts regardless.

Your dialog is a carbon copy of the terrible acting in porn movies and vulgar language is not really a turn on. I would recommend setting your sights higher for your characters. Check out the story below.

The God of Mischief and Lies - Loki finds something he can't control...

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1659737&page=submissions

Ok with is it? Is she lana or just a copy that thinks she is the original?