All Comments on 'Down at the Twist and Shout Ch. 04'
by beachbum1958
- 22 Comments
dwoelfleabout 6 years agoThis is a fun story with great characters. Keep it coming!
ender2k2kabout 6 years agoCan’t wait for the next chapter. Thanks
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoI just read all 4 chapters and wish there was another one to read now. I haven't been reading the incest section for a while but I am glad that I looked today and read this.
I look forward to more chapters
oldnhornyalmost 6 years agoThis is the 3rd or 4th story I loved to read that you left unfinished. I loved them all. This one had a different theme to it, but again you left me hanging. You are going to FINISH it right? Keep up the great work. .
beachbum1958almost 6 years agoAuthorAlong with the last part of the 'In Love With Lori' series; I have to balance writing with my work, and the nature of my work is such that it has to take priority, but never fear, they'll both be here! I haven't actually left any of my story series' unfinished as far as I'm aware, so I'm not sure what you mean by that, kindly elucidate.
Anonymousabout 5 years agoAre you ever going to finish this story or post the next chapter?I have been checking periodically for months for an updated chapter.Love the story would like to read the rest of it.
beachbum1958about 5 years agoAuthorI apologise for the delay in publishing Ch.5 but I've been dealing with some really quite severe family illness issues recently, as has my editor, and as a consequence, writing has had to take very much a back seat. Chapter 5 is actually finished, but it would be callous, self-centered, and unsympathetic in the extreme for me to insist my editor get on with it while he deals with his own family health and injury issues. I do have high hopes of getting the chapter edited, corrected, and published soon, just not immediately, so please bear with me
BB1958
Anonymousabout 5 years agoWhat happened? Where’s the rest of the story?
Was really enjoying the action.
beachbum1958about 5 years agoAuthorChapter 5 is pretty much completed, serious family health issues have kind of put me a little way behind, but the last part is 97% completed, and should be with my editor any day now
linnearabout 5 years agoI glad to hear you are working on part five and I hope your health is improving. This was another good chapter and I'm sure you will satisfy our image with the final part.
Dutch9290about 5 years agoHello BB1958,
Hmmm, can't recall if that was a good year or not...Oh well...
More to the point; just finished the four chapters, and in the midst of whining WHAT!!?...He can't leave me HERE!!!...etc, I thought to check the comments.
Felt a little bit bad when reading about your health problems...kind of selfish, in fact...but encouraged by seeing your last reply in early April! I guess I can wait till you feel well enough....Waiting.....(Tongue in cheek)
Anonymousabout 5 years agoI love this series & look forward to more of it. Thank you for responding to your readers, letting us know that more is coming. This is the best I’ve read on Literotica. You could write a series of novels based on these characters. I’d buy them for sure. Thank you!
Jagnagabout 5 years agoBest ever story ivevread on here, loved it :)
Thankyou so very much 😁😁😁😁
Mhouseralmost 5 years agoPlease finish it's a great story. Love that you've kept it with just them and not added no one to their love making
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoPlease don't let this be the last installment. I love your writing but this would just leave everyone hanging so please, please, please continue this.
goducks111over 4 years agothis is sooo good i don't know if i could have waited a year to read the end. this story is Brilliant. just f*cking brilliant. may be your best. I've felt that about almost everything else you've written. but this one........ can't wait ti start chapter 5
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