All Comments on 'Double Your Pleasure'

definately an excellant story..not realistic..but i don't care it was a hot story

Whatever planet these people inhabit...I wanna move there!<p>

I'd give it a 100 but it was just a little TOO absurd. Maybe dial back the sheer numbers just a little bit along with the ease and the frequency of each new coupling. A little build up before each explosion wouldn't hurt. If you could manage to include even a modicum of plot credibility it'd be absolutely killer and a definite 100. As it stands it's still really good but it's so off the wall and silly that it almost begs for its own new category: Unintentionally Funny Sci-Fi!<p>

really good story i hope you continue it where it finished the end seemed a bit rushed thou

You have got to continue this story.

A true exotic experience. Please continue the story line.

this story is fuckin awsome. omg

You are not going to just stop there are you? There sould be so many more possibilities and connections to make. Is there realy a Mr. Bill? Do Randall or Kimiko have any siblings? Please don't make us wait very long for the next chapter.

Another great story! I love all the pussy to mouth action, when the girls love to taste pussy juice. I am hoping the female characters in the future will all love ass to mouth, tasting sweet ass juice (after daily enemas of course), and they learn to gape their perfect asses, this would make a series so exicting. Keep them coming! Thank you.

you made my cock hard. you madde me cum, several times. This story is sexy and dirty and nasty and ... great. Please do more,,, much more.... expand options.... add more dirty characters... if ppls think theyre too many characters... no,... just name the relevant families with the same names.. ie andy, alice, alex, betty, brian, bill, charlies, claire, candy... so you know the family ties... but im begging you for more.. please!

another hot story from an amazingly hot writer. i loved the bisexuality in his father. wonderful wonderful writing.

I have always enjoyed your writing! You are one of the first authors I came to love on this site and to this day you are still on of my favorites!

Please keep the stories coming, especially ones like this! I've noticed a few of your stories seem to stop mid way through where several key characters never get in on the action! Please keep it coming and please get more submissions on this site! They are beautiful fantasies to read and we all need more of them!

You want unending hot/juicy/completely uninhibited sex -- cock 'n' cunt, plus oral and anal, switching partners round and round? Well, this is it. The pace of the writing matches the frantically sensual plotline. Morality and deeper emotions play little role here, although the twins' and their parents' love for each other is clear (but by no means exclusive). Pure down-and-dirty, hot and exhausting fucking, sucking, jacking and screwing rule! The resale value of these women's cunts and asses and the men's cocks is, to quote W.C. Fields, "going to be nil." Meantime it's one hell of a sex romp!

I thought the wedding could have been its own story. Nice to see Brian helping with the blessings.

Wow...I want a sister like that!

Am I ever glad I found this! absolutely every thing packed into 1 full all out fucking frenzy. Absolutely wild I love it thanks. Pls keep writing

I LOVED her sucking her son off to,she is the "Perfect Woman" that every hubby,son and daughter would love having. This is way more than the 5 star rating,more like 10.

Longtongue

How about a conclusion or a sequel? This story ranks up on list of favorites by you, Service, Erin, Cheerleader, Jenny, Liveaboard Fun, Sis, Summer Camp, Twins, and Total Massage. How about a sequel to some of these stories or a story franchise intertwining the stories?

please more

love it so far

Great Story well written and compulsive

5 stars. any thought of a sequel here? great characters and great storyline. never too long a wait!!

absolutely brilliant!

Had me going from the very first moment, please...some more if possible.

Really impressed with your writing style

Nice premise.

But sex is too automatic. No reluctance. No needing to be 'convinced'. Just boom! Simply having a lot of sex action, unless it's well described isn't erotic. Not to me, anyway.

Three stars.

I wish there was more! And some more bi-male action. Wonderful story about lust! No feeling or love to spoil the desire. 5stars

Another HOT! story.

That was a wild and fu, and it voila been explored more with the fence. Well done.

No warnings for those who do not want to be confronted by certain sexual situations that they find extremely offensive,. Normally it is done as a courtesy, apparently it needs to be made a requirement.

great story!!

Super hot story! Please add more chapters.

Love this story, would love a sequel.

Missing "GAY" tag :(