by lovecraft68
I love romantic stories like this that don't have 10" cocks and 44EEE tits. Five stars and a favorite point!
Excellent! Well-written. Gave me a brief return to the good and bad of my own Pentecostal youth in the early fifties.
I always love your writing! Your stories for me are an automatic read. ALWAYS! Thank you for the time you invest in your writing and then sharing it with us. Such an honor:-)
I'm not usually one for a period piece like this, but it definitely added to the story.
However...I could not get the song "Car Wash" out of my head as I read it...
Well done, well written and not overly long. You just keep getting better. Thanks for this one. 5/5
I'm mixed on this one. The story itself is well done - the characters are reasonable, and their circumstances and what they lead to are logical. The frustrating part is that this result (or the "how many loveless marriages exist because...") are all too existent in the real world. The gatekeeping of "the only unsinful sex can only be obtained through our rituals" continues to be a lodestone on societies. Well done story, nonetheless.
I enjoyed this story. I expect that some children raised in this manner rebel in various ways. Some probably just like Royce and Rose. I grew up in the same era, but with much more liberal parents. As a protestant dating lots of Catholic girls, I had similar experiences resulting in awakenings for many. Good memories!
Very well done! This incest to me is far more appealing and acceptable than this ridiculous transgender crap being shoved on us. Keep up the good writing!
Well L C, once again you've nailed it. Your description of annual Summer Camp had an uncanny resemblance to my own experiences of such events in days gone by. The draconian and hipocritical attitude to children and teenagers was something I'll never forget. Once again thank you for sharing your incredible writing talent with us.
Thank you so much, Laura, for such a fantastic skillfully written story of a precious and beautiful consanguineous relationship that withstood the test of time, even decades. Your story excellently highlights the irony of right-wing ultra-conservative religion that manages to distort a religion, that in its mainstream forms is supposed to be about love, into a religion that deems loving and beautiful relationships as so-called "sinful". Your story shows that in intimate relationships, happiness, pleasure, and especially love, are the only ingredients that really matter, meaning whether or not lovers are same-sex lovers, multiple lovers in a happy polyamorous group of 3 or more, or sister and brother lovers as in your beautiful story, its love that makes all these types of relationships precious, right, and good. So, the consanguinamory in your story between consenting adults who love each other deeply is an absolutely beautiful relationship. 5 stars for this story for sure.
Loved and love how you write; this story in particular, is extremely well written, impregnated with romance, love, and lust. Well done LC; can't wait to read and appreciate you once more.
xoxo
My own experience was that for a very long time. Several years in fact, my sister and I did not participate in oral sex. For many months we just touched, then came the fateful afternoon when while rubbing genitals, my cock popped inside her. We never turned back, she's gone now, but remembering our secret assignations are always the easiest and most exciting memories I have. Fifty years of keeping secrets from parents, friends and family, and yes even husbands and wives. We always thought it worthwhile.
This was a sweet story, and well-written, but the brother didn’t seem to have much of a personality. We aren’t shown why the sister is so attracted to him. I’m not even talking about physically; he just seems like a clueless yokel agreeing to everything his bolder, more adventurous sister suggests.
It seems like these are characters from another of your stories? Maybe there he displays some reason for Rose to gain such an attraction to him, but there’s not much of his personality on display here, even accounting for their cloistered situation.
The story could have been improved by Royce expressing his own opinion about something other than horny agreement to what his sister suggests.
This story gets a 10+ from me, And at least a couple of extra tugs on the old cock. You did a great job of building the premise for it...and brought it to a crescendo...and then a triumphant chorus...and then a working finale. I LOVED IT!!!
I'm most attracted to a story when it's more about the buildup, the phases people go through as they discover love. Ypu've done an excellemt job with that.
Very good and well-written; I didn't want to stop until the end. I am as uncomfortable in my jeans as Royce was.
This story is amazing!
This was a fun read and the ending is so sweet.
I’ve been following this author for awhile and the stories are a good hit steamy reading with sweet endings
This felt different from your usual stories.
It swoons more, felt softer. Less playful. Given that my go-to's of yours are in the NC/R category, I was surprised how much I enjoyed this.
Look forward to seeing how the concept develops (and - as another run-of-the-mill, aspiring writer, I'm taking notes)!
Did I miss a step in the chronology? Royce and Rose are 73. They started having sex 50 years ago, which would make them 23. Yet they started having sex at 18.
Thank you, this one brings back such sad times to mind about the one that got away.
This is funny story. But i would have made it much longer. There is material for it. For example, the first encounter is too quick. This is not realistic that teen go so quickly from total ignorant to so easy and pleasurable sex. Then the jimp to the epilogue is frustating. I guess there would have material for describing the first weeks..etc.
Story could have been better, it was good, but the sexual ability of 2 clueless ignorant virgins being that good. It's unrealistic and kinda drops the ball for the tale.