All Comments on 'Clit Training'

Love the premise, but I feel that opening is a hot mess of confusion. Also, suggest using the tag 'orgasm denial'

This story really needs a sequel, we need more from these women!

Tom, I don't disagree with you. I'd love to have another story about these women. Having said that, I'm stumped. Plot in any story is where I struggle the most. To me a story is--someone wants something, some has obstacles to getting something and someone either gets or does not get something. The problem is, once the obstacle is surmounted, there is very little story left. In this story Michelle wanted to remain part of the pack, the obstacle was her compliance to the dare, she complied and retained what she wanted. I suppose I could go back in time and write about the other women's challenges.