by TryAnything
Yes, everyone likes to think the wife will be fucking all your buddies because you spend time with them.
Somehow, it doesn't equal out. Riley seems to be a semiqueer or it might have turned out like real life.
D I V O R C E
Would absolutely do it for me.!!
Nightowl21
The so called "author" is about the worst writer I've ever read. He uses Rileys so called friends to fuck the slut wife.
If he weren't such a wimp closet fag he would leave them all at the cabin...dead if possible, and go back home and change all the locks on the house, Change his will and put all the money in his name only...credit cards and all. and see a divorce lawyer. When slut fuck wife gets home with his former buddies he can make them leave and if they try and break into his home he can kill every one of them..then after they are dead he can suck their cocks.
Have a modicum of pride. Riley has nothing. He is the Lab dog that is sitting around lickinf people. He is the epitome of what a real man isn't. Make no mistake cocksuckers are real men also. Riley is a pansy faggot. He is a dub ass as exhibited by the fact that his so called wife...in reality a real pig slut and the so called friends are laughing at Riley's stupidity. Try anything did come up with the most disgusting characters known to man but I think that he thinks he (or it) is clever thats the furtherest thing from reality as you can get. The entire cast as well as the ( author ha ha) need to be cast into a bottomless pit and burn in hell forever while they have to read stupid stories like this...marriedwithballs@yahoo.com
HAWT... love the beginning cuckold and active bi-sexuality of Riley.
LUCKY MARY
God people, don't like, don't read, but don't leave such harsh comments because you are assholes, if you didn't like it, you didn't have to read it. I, personally thought it was good.
why do people get so wound up ? Look for the word "fantasy" in a dictionary then think about it.
whats with al the fag comments? if you dont like this story then dont read it. oh and ps to the fucking moron that came up with some retard version of this story that had nothing to do with sex...all i can say is that this is litterotica bitch, this sight is all sex so dont expect anything else
pss, try anything is obviously a very talented erotic author
This particular effort was written at a 4th grade level, plot is so predictable & boring that is simple a "poor read". Not one of this author's best endeavors. It sucked! Henceforth, as one of many anon who do not bother to use stage names like www or bonnietaylor - freedom to express one's opinion is still a right in this country so far. Hard to say if those conditions will exist in the future with this latest friggin administration in the white house [time will tell if the golden boy will save the world as he predicts]. But that freedom is utilized whether the wimps or alpha humans agree or disagree on their particular rating of each story.
Dump her quick and get it over with, she will be bring home STD's left and right now.
Oil cloth sheets for her bed, that way they could wipe up all of the cum from her bed. The fun thing is taking up a pool on who the father is going to be of her baby.Thanks for the story......Rich
did wife teach husband, how to raise bastard kids, how to be a laughing stock of neighborhood, how to be a good little cuck. I would have found my gun and left the slut and so called friends naked, tied up, no trans or I.D. driven home and rid myself of some trash. But thats just me.
I am still looking for the lession? Mary is a slut that is for sure. Riley is a wimp so maybe that is the lession. Both should not be married and Mary should get a bunk but not in the cabin. She needs it in the nearest flop house at the street corner she can hustle tricks at.
but she wants to teach him a lesson? I'd teach her a lesson as I took photos to show to my former friend's wives and family, to use in the divorce and show to the ex wife's friends coworkers and family. Teach me a lesson bitch? I'l teach you one you fucking whore!
These 2 shouldn't be in a series. They're totally unrelated.
other than robert being part of it , but reading chapter two i no longer feel sorry for robert just wish parents hadnt lied to sue to take her virginity it did work out for the best in the end but i still didnt like the deception
The story was good and hot. Mary wasn't raped, she asked / consented to sex with all the men at the camp. They were all adults, yes it may bother some people and its not what many men & women would do; BUT its a fantasy She decided to act on.
Please write another chapter about what Mary does with the boys next trip ! Thank you.
I do not understand why do some posters kill the slut wives. Divorce them (bastard and STD danger) and there are concurents to let the prostitutes price dicrease......
I agree with tryanything, these hater comments are entertaining. Obviously they're posting just to be negative. They have NO intention of enjoying any of the stories. Haha, you morons!
...why some people feel the need to post negatively. The writing may not be perfect, and the subject matter may not be your cup of tea, but still they contributed. Just mark however many stars you think it deserves and move on. Or just ignore it, and read the stuff you like. Your bitter insult-filled comments here will change nothing.
For me, I prefer wife-sharing consenting adults with everyone "in on it" and participating, over any form of cuckoldry or non-consensual sex, but I am not everyone. To each their own.
Not one of TryAnything's best stories, but readers should get over themselves with the negative comments and move on!
But soooo hot, great story, loved the "instant" slut in Mary, hope the boys (and a few more friends) are going camping again soon. More please!!
Nadine
I enjoy reading stories by this author. Some stories are better than other. If I don’t enjoy a story I rate it with fewer stars. I don’t think anonymous comments should be allowed, especially if they are nothing but scarcasm. If you don’t have the courage to add your name; keep your negative remarks to yourself. If you are confident enough to add your identity; then go for it.
This was a very nice story. The only thing I don't think you took into account is that Mary is a human being. And women do tend to get sore at some point. I've only been able to do it three time with a woman before she's too sore for a fourth. Yet Mary did Mark and Robert not an hour before and then she did them again and John also and she was still asking for more? I think you just got to excited with this story. Like I said I liked this story it was wonderful you just had to many cocks in there not to mention an extra large one to boot.
This story needs an ending where Reilly learns to really enjoy a cum covered cock in his mouth.
Does she live with now that Riley got smart and had her served?
my 2nd read of this stroke tale,, like it muchly,, my suggestion for an ending line would have been " now who is going to fix breakfast"? it would show her superiority over the guys and she is in charge,,,if they want more pussy. lolol.
The storyline was brilliantly crafted.
First husband wasn't very drunk
Secondly Mary could have screamed and ended it.
Third screwing somebody in front of husband and belittling him.
Fourth after having monstrous cock twice and two others and your ready for more, its time to change locks, friends and get an attorney.
Yes, there are supposed to be men who are proud that their wives are like garbage cans. Any idiot can throw something in it and in the end the husband pays the dues for the bin.
Well definitely garbage. Prefer your other story when it’s consensual. These guys would definitely not be welcome as friends after such betrayal and Mary should be in a dumpster.