by mypenname3000
good story, but you could really use a proof read or editor. Good luck on next chapter
I can't wait for more chapters to "cum", So far its a fantastic erotic story!!
I enjoy your writing but god do I loathe the way you make bimbos talk in your stories, with all the adding y's to words. It's not hot, it's just sounds stupid.
Very hot. And Vulture 051, the words sound stupid because they are meant to be. After all a bimbo is one with an airhead. The app makes her brainless and stupid, also totally immoral and lusty.