All Comments on 'Bimbo App Cathedral of Sin 01'

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Master_DoctorMaster_Doctor10 months ago

good story, but you could really use a proof read or editor. Good luck on next chapter

PassionateCelinePassionateCeline10 months ago

I can't wait for more chapters to "cum", So far its a fantastic erotic story!!

Vulture051Vulture0516 months ago

I enjoy your writing but god do I loathe the way you make bimbos talk in your stories, with all the adding y's to words. It's not hot, it's just sounds stupid.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Very hot. And Vulture 051, the words sound stupid because they are meant to be. After all a bimbo is one with an airhead. The app makes her brainless and stupid, also totally immoral and lusty.

lustychimeralustychimera2 months ago

Wonderful writing! Hooked me right from the get go.

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Erotic author been writing since 2013. I've had two stories blocked by literotica for being written by AI, Bimbo App Santa's Naughty Gift 3 & Mommy's Incubus Son Comes of Age 14. That one was rejected 4 times despite my protests. Talked to site admin and she just sent me a lin...

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