All Comments on 'Beyond the Were War Ch. 07'

Great chapter but you lit Juan off to easy, he needed two or three very painful days to die. At the least Maria should have gotten some of her own back.

As she is now Pack and the Pack killed him. He did lose his money, kill his own trusted associates, and watch his empire crumble before being killed.

I was so hoping Juan was tortured long and hard before he met his death. But I understand they had more pressing issues to worry about.

I agree, I would have pealed them all like a grape over a long period of time with grievous amounts of alcohol added to the process. Great Story!!! I can't wait to continue reading

It isn't the way of wolves. Kill your enemy and move on.

Plus, Renee used the cuts and rubbing alcohol thing earlier.

Is this the end of series ?????

I left things so I could pick it up again if I think of a good way to extend it. I like the characters and we'll see what happens in the future. I hope you all enjoyed it.

Yes. I'm glad it ended this way. I only wished they'd gotten to bugger Juan with his own appendage. Damn him to hell for hurting Renee. Loved it. Looking forard to whatever is next.

I really enjoyed this story.

And I'm working on more chapters!

They let Alpha Merino know what happened, but didn't call Derek Johnson to let him know Renee was OK? That's strange. Other than that, great chapter!

Not quite the end but looks like all the action is just about done.

5 stars.

Youve fallen into that mcu thing of increasing or decreasing the strengths of characters as needed by the script... There is absolutely no reason that renee couldn't have escaped when they were moving her and changing her restraints... Shes a were... They're two cartel minnions... Even with silver on her ankles she should have been able to take them out easily... Then taken their keys... Freed herself and taken out juan and the rest... But then you would have no "rest of story"... Several parts of this tale were shaky like that... Not your best episode... JMO