by MsAppropriately
Very enjoyable start. I like how your taking time to set up the story and building the characters. Each character introduced has they’re own mysterious past which I look forward to having you unveil. Please post next chapter soon!
Thank you so much for the kind words! Next few chapters are underway and I'm having a blast mapping out the growth of relationships as well as developing the primary plotline for the story. I'll get to start introducing some new concepts fairly soon, and I'm very excited about them.
What a delightfully intriguing entry into this 'alternate' world. If the rest of the story maintains this high standard then I know that I am in for a treat. The story is so well written and I am already invested in the two main characters and want to know so much more about them. needless to say it gets five stars from me.
Great start, really love the idea of a "Sherlockish" storyline. Looking forward to how it's going to build up.
Coming into this a bit late but thoroughly enjoying. Great characters!
Just starting this story now, and I'm quite taken with it! Quite an interesting world you're building, dark though it may be.
How have I now only found this!
Love the dark edgy vibe, can’t wait to read more
A romantic slow burn of a story, I love these. You have all the right ingredients for a thrilling story and already the two main characters are building into a dynamic duo.
I came across you quite by accident, and so glad I did. This will be an exciting journey.
5 stars by the way.