All Comments on 'Appointment Ch. 03'

Just a few typos and punctuation errors, so overall a fine piece of craftwork. I can't imagine a woman physician banging a teenage boy but I'm willing to suspend disbelief. Yeah, IF it happened, it might go like that. Keep those chapters cummin'!

this little story brings back some memories. LOL

I could read another three chapters or more of this young man's adventures.

I like the story, it is written well, it flows well too. All though it seems, to me, like your writing style changed slightly. It is a lovely story of coming of age. 5*

Every young man should have a woman doctor to, um, explain things. :) (wink)

Thanks for the story.

Another good story. Glad you continue to write.

Do you have any idea what happened to DQS1?

Hi.

Sorry, no idea, I liked those tales myself. Also, sorry I haven't been writing much, working on one explaining why. Sort of got run over, been laid up.

My 20 WPM typing keeps production slow.

Thanks,

MGM

A fun story but not your normal story style. Thank you for the entertainment..

LOL

Just a line to say that this is the first of your stories that I have read. I like the style and the subject matter, you write very well. I look forward to reading the rest of your stories gradually reading through your story list. Best regards, 5*****

Jane