All Comments on 'Appointment'

I really liked the innocence and sweetness of the two kids. The story seemed realistic, and more sexy to me because of it.

It's a great story and I can see it having a few more chapters.

The only suggestion I have is that it might belong in the first time or some other category as opposed to this one. That's really my only complaint

I liked it, I have been stung many times, just not there. This was an enjoyable quick read.

Some years ago, I was helping clean and overgrown yard like this and the exact thing happened with wasps except it was one of the "family jewels" instead. The swelling required a clinic visit and a friend was the nurse. SOOOOOOOOO TOTALLY EMBARRASSING!!!!!